Rayna/Steels songs

by **Steel** Fri Apr 15, 2016 1:39 pm

Here I will put my songs, Along with a tune, what type of voice I'm using for that specific song, etc, Above the song i will say unfinished or finished. I don't have much time to work on songs though, So it would be awesome if some people gave feedback, good or bad, in the comments! Say what you like/don't like, so i can know what way to turn!

This poem isn't mine, But my grandfather died a bit over a year ago due to cancer, And I still miss him, This is one poem I love, Because it fits him. I don't really have a religion, So I believe god, but know its very possible he doesn't exist. My strongest belif is probably reincarnation, Because exactly a year after he died, My dog gave birth to 11 puppies, One of which was a very large male (My grandfather was large and strong) and had J.C (my grandfathers initials) on his chest in white. I believe that's him, but because I have no proof, I still REALLY miss him, He was probably the only thing or person that took the weight off my shoulders, Everyone loved him. He was funny, Smart, A hard worker, and would walk the extra mile even if it didn't help him in any way.

Author- Unknown

God looked upon his garden
And found an empty place.
He then looked down upon this earth
and saw your tired face.

He put his arms around you
And lifted you to rest.
Gods garden must be beautiful
He always takes the best.

He knew that you were suffering
He knew you were in pain.
He knew you would never
Get well on earth again.

He saw the road was getting rough
And the hills were hard to climb
So he closed your weary eyelids
And whispered "Peace be thine."

It broke our hearts to lose you
But you didn't go alone
For part of us went with you
The day God called you home.

You left us beautiful memories,
Your love is still our guide.
And though we cannot see you,
You are always at our side.

Our family chain is broken,
And nothing seems the same,
But as God calls us one by one
The chain will link again.

Not finished yet
Song name- Little Girl
I can't explain the beat, or tune that I sing it to. If you are curious about that, Ask me to send a video message of me singing it on skype, and I well as soon as possible, But there well very likely be a wait.

There's a little girl who's depressed, Suicidal
It hurt her to smile, Said trying wasn't worth her while
She would do anything for anyone, She would walk the extra mile
No one understood how she did it, Never understood how she was stable with her lifestyle
So i'm going to tell you her story
it may be sad but don't close your eyes
Her dad was busted for weed
So him and her momma broke up, Her momma started making herself bleed
Keep in mind this little girl is five years old
For her age she was very bold
But at eight her dad moved away into his own house
So she had to stay with her grandmother
But she's insane
So bad that this little girl got headaches
So she cut herself like her momma did before her
she told her friend a few months later, But they used that against her
Now the whole school knows what she does
so she walks around with a fake smile
But when she's all alone her head is singin'

Just do it, no one well miss you
They're all here to dis you
You aren't strong enough to do it anway
So just pick up that gun, rope, and blade
So you don't have to live through another day
Little girl, no one likes you
But no one knows what you've been through
So look down, pick up the blade, and that'll have to make do
Can't live through the pain of another day
So cut yourself with your beloved blade
The scar well never quite fade

by Phoenix Fri Apr 15, 2016 11:29 pm

you will NEVER be a disgrace Rayna. Never. There are people on this site like me who think of you as family. You can always shoot me a PM if you want to talk. I'd never laugh at you and i promise I'll try to help in any way i can. I'm sure that everyone here would listen to you as well.

by **Steel** Sun Apr 17, 2016 6:47 pm

Phoenix wrote:
you will NEVER be a disgrace Rayna. Never. There are people on this site like me who think of you as family. You can always shoot me a PM if you want to talk. I'd never laugh at you and i promise I'll try to help in any way i can. I'm sure that everyone here would listen to you as well.

Thanks, but that's kinda what i'm doing by posting my songs
:D

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